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Done because :iconcharkonian: told me to o:

I like how this picture came out personally. I think i did a good job with the sky. I tried adding some speed lines so it could give it that velocity effect as he is plummeting to the earth.

Ah well. If you guys like it, feel free to comment in anyway. As always, Critique is welcome.

Calin the bullfrog is (c) to his respected owner

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:iconmetaander:
First of all, I would like to clarify that this is my first critique. The effect of wind is a good idea but not enough worked. For the effect to be successful, the lines should have been more and they should have reached the bottom of the image, just like in the manga. A little more than clouds (three or four) would give the sky a little more realistic, because someone who looks at drawing as a whole doesn't notice that this is a sky as background, although the most important is this frog blown by a gust.

Besides those "two minor defects", it's a magnificent work : nice colors, the meticulous attention to detail and funny. Clearly, good job.

P.S. : If you want to comment on this critique, send me a note. The opinion of other interests me, unless it's insults and disrespect.
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:iconthe-big-z:
Now I'm sure the big guy would like this.

The thick saliva looks pretty smooth for jolting out of his mouth.

Those speed lines and the extent of his mouth flapping back can only tell me that he's ...coming in from orbit. Right?

I also see what you did with the background up there in the top left. Those clouds are smoothed nicely. Not too much to be out of focus, and not too little to look as if they're about to slap you :D

It's good, it's very very good, now it needs a backstory, Colin doesn't get angry often!
:iconbradry:
Awesome. I like the reaction on his face.

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:iconatimistfox:
Yeah man, I think the lines help add emphases to the speed, along with the cheek flappin' and tear from the eye.
Nice pic. man, but I'm not sure I see a cute? o.O

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:iconyarifazanax:
nice pic bro! made the character pretty cool!

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:icontodoyasislander:
I've never understood vp's when they go off the paper...

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:iconglamator:
thats very awesome man, the expresion looks sweeet, you can feel the motion , the speed lines help but I think its the spit that does it, good clothing, and the bg looks great to, awesome job all around.

love it.
:D

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:iconkeenfox:
I totally dig this! :D
:icontriggerd:
Heeeeeennnngh!!~ *flappaflappaflappaflappa*

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:icontriggerd:
Cute? Are you saying you find the hurtling battle toad cute? You're weird sir. WEIRD.

Why aren't we chatting?

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First Anthropomorphic frog I've ever drawn ever.

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